Should junk food be banned? (summary)

this is a summary of an essay. you will have to read it and summarize it. but before you start it you must write a journal entry 1 paragraph long on how my teachers feedback affected this assignment. my teachers feedback was:
study parallel sentence structure elements in balance and make sure nouns and pronouns are in agreement please use this info to make a journal entry that 1 paragraph long and then read the essay and write a grammatically correct summary