” is going vegan as good as everyone says”

Incorporate instructor feedback from your week 9-11 submissions to revise and submit a first draft of the research project (title page, abstract, introduction, body, conclusion, and APA formatted in-text citations and reference list).

Below is some of my professors feedback:
Great content information and writing. Be sure to label the other sections of the paper as you write them over the next few weeks. Great job.
For title page, first, last and important words should be capitalized.
The second part of the assignment was only the reference list itself. Some of the entries do not seem to have all of the information required for APA formatting. Please recheck the sources before including them in the Reference list for the paper itself.