Colleen – very nicely organized and supported with relevant quotes from the article. I think this is also a great blend of your opinion and the author’s opinion. A few pointers as you move through the drafting process.
-Remember that the citations should be in APA format instead of MLA. Refer to OWL Purdue if you need a refresher on how to format APA citations. Let me know if you need any pointers on where to find that guide on the OWL Purdue website.
So, what about her article makes it convincing to you? What elements of ethos/logos/pathos is she using to sway the reader? What is she leaving out, if anything? Do you have any critiques of her style?