artifact four rewrite

This product is part of my masters portfolio and requires the final edit using the smartthinking tutor feedback.

The feedback is uploaded tutor response.

The tutor did not hit me too hard with corrections. So, for the writer use the tutors feedback and please make the best corrections possible for this paper.

Feel free to use whatever source you require, but it must be scholarly or at least a primary source.

Please use APA seventh edition.